26 April 2020
Pride, The Fall, Redemption
by R.T. Lawton
PRIDE:
They say that Pride goeth before The Fall. That's me. For a lot of years, I was a man of consequence, but lately, Father Time has found it humorous to saddle me with age and thus remind me of the limitations I now have. Used to be, I lived the life, whether it was kicking doors,riding roundup, scuba diving, ziplining, branding calves, over the road on Harleys, coming in hot in Hueys, traveling to exotic lands and places... It was a rush.
And then came The Fall.
THE FALL:
In the beginning, it was more a series of little trips and stumbles. A health thing here, a degenerating vision thing there. Sorry pal, you're going to have to slow down to a walk, no more running for you. I was never a top athlete, one who was going to run a marathon, but c'mon knees, ankles, feet, wind, where'd you go? Yeah, I know, I never acted my age, especially in later years, but that was a good thing. It kept me going. Sure, I saw others in my different groups slowing down with age, but that was them. This was me. For a long time, even the mirror was on my side. What the hell happened?
And then, about three weeks ago, Father Time decided that the art of multi-tasking should now be beyond my capabilities. I should no longer be able to walk and chew gum at the same time. Of course, I swear I was not chewing gum at the time of the trip, stumble and fall, but down I went anyway. The sidewalk won that bout. I came off second with scrapes, bruises, stitches and a nicked temporal artery. Man them things leak a lot of red stuff. Even the mirror said it didn't like me anymore. Something about if I had bolts in my neck, then I'd have a pieced-together face like Frankenstein's monster. I tell you, I gotta get a new mirror.
The ER doc sewed me up and I figured I could go home and be done with this fiasco. Much later, a nurse came in with discharge papers and explained which direction to walk to get to the ER waiting room where I could wait for my wife to collect me. Cell phones don't get reception in the ER rooms themselves, so I had to wait patiently until I got to the ER waiting room to call my wife for a ride home. AND, since I had no other clothes, AND since relatives are not allowed in ER rooms these days to even bring you fresh clothes, AND since the hospital will not loan you one of their fashionable backless gowns, I had to wear my long-sleeve, denim shirt which was thoroughly soaked with O-Positive, in order for me to leave the ER and go into the waiting room.
Fortunately, there were only two people sitting in the waiting room. Don't know how they got in as neither was a patient. Both had the appearance of street people. However, it was a large waiting room, so no problem keeping my social distancing. Then, I start listening to their conversation which consisted mostly of two related topics; cocaine and overdosing. Seems they had a friend in the ER as a patient. Guess the security guard must've had a soft spot in his heart to let them wait inside and occasionally inquire of the admission staff about their friend. But wait, it gets better.
The door from the ER rooms and into the ER waiting room opens and in strolls a "gentleman" with a long braid of hair hanging down his back and a lengthy key chain hanging from his belt down to his knees and back up into his front pants pocket. Obviously he doesn't have a cell phone because he goes straight to the free, old-style phone on the wall. I have no idea who he calls, but some of the first words out of his mouth quickly grab my attention. Words like: "No, I'm not escaping." Yeah, I know I was supposed to be outside the house at noon for them to pick me up." "No, I'm not trying to escape." "Look, just stall them." "No, don't tell them I'm at the hospital." "I told you, I'm not escaping." Then, he hangs up. Since the door back into the ER automatically locks after it closes, one of the two armed security guards has to let him back into the ER
This particular armed guard, who has previously been content to drink coffee and chat with the admissions people at the ER front door now turns and notices me in my slightly wet, drying from red to very dark red shirt. Coffee and chit chat go by the wayside. He casts a wary eye on me and immediately takes up a position against a nearby wall, with his arms crossed over his chest and a hard look in his eyes. I am now a person of interest. It must be the company I've been keeping. Thank God my ride soon showed up so the guards could relax and go back to drinking coffee.
REDEMPTION:
Home at last. Fresh clothes. A pocketful of extra strength Tylenol. Yes, we did stop at the scene of the crime on our way home, but still can't figure out how or why the fall happened. It will just have to remain as one of those unexplained mysteries, but I can tell you there won't be any gum chewing in my future, for sure. I'll also have to avoid the mirror for a few days (we aren't getting along lately), but hey, everybody's got some problems these days.
And then.
I did what? You got to be kidding me.
Well then, forget all that other stuff.
I JUST SOLD ANOTHER STORY TO ALFRED HITCHCOCK MYSTERY MAGAZINE.
That makes 46 short stories they've bought from me.
Hey, I'm almost good again. I'll see what the mirror has to say about it.
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Nothing like a good sale to subdue ( temporarily) the pains and annoyances of old age! Congratulations and walk with care.
ReplyDeleteHey RT -- Sorry to hear about the mishap, but glad to hear about the acceptance. Always love reading your stories in AHMM. And be careful!
ReplyDeleteThere's nothing like a sale to cheer you up and make pain disappear - at least for a few minutes.
ReplyDeleteAnd what a great story-sparker you got in that hospital! "No, I'm not escaping"... I love it!
Wow. That must have been some fall to nick an artery. I'm glad you're okay. I'm also glad you overheard that conversation. You've got to be able to use that sometime. And congrats on the sale!
ReplyDeleteWow, congratulations on the AHMM story and congratulations on surviving the fall and the hospital. Well done, RT. And stay safe(r)!
ReplyDeleteSo, does the sale make up for the fall? Don't answer that. Stay well!
ReplyDeleteCongratulations on the story sale to AHMM! That is wonderful! On the topic of failing health as one ages, last summer I was hit for no apparent reason with a case of sepsis. The ER staff asked me several times if I had fallen, and they have signs posted saying "Call, don't fall." I actually fell down while mowing the lawn a month or two earlier but I didn't think it was a big deal. As a child I was a tomboy, always climbing trees, & going on the zipwire at camp. Those days are gone ...
ReplyDeleteDamn. I missed this posting yesterday. Gravity's a bitch. My last fall was off a ladder resulting in 3 broken ribs - a few years ago. Hope you are OK. Great news about AHMM.
ReplyDeleteWhat a story, RI. Hope you are feeling better by the hour and that the mirror is mirroring your recovery. Be careful out there. Look out for Pride.
ReplyDeleteOUCH! Sorry the ground tripped you, my friend.
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