Last time, we focused on fuzzy ‘soft’ clues in determining AI fingerprints in text, especially identifying common phrases and constructs. Computer people refer to fuzzy methods as heuristics.
- We noted triplets.
- “He was tall, dark, and handsome.”
- We noted parallel negatives.
- “It wasn’t black. It wasn’t white. It was charcoal grey.”
- We noted common phraseology.
- “It’s not just warm, it’s burning.”
Today we slide away from soft dissection to hard facts and more scientific methods. Assertions have been made that combining hard and soft techniques can result in 80-90% accuracy. Google claims it can identify close to 98%.
Note that I used Google Gemini and Microsoft Copilot to research and organize this, part 2 of this article. Thus throughout, you’ll notice artifacts as unintended examples.
While intuitive reading can reveal stylistic quirks that feel artificial, a scientific approach to AI‑text detection relies on measurable linguistic properties. These properties emerge from how large language models generate text: token by token, guided by probability distributions learned from massive corpora. By analyzing those distributions, we can identify patterns that differ from human writing in consistent, quantifiable ways.
This section outlines the major pillars of a hard, objective approach — the kind that complements your Part I by grounding intuition in data.
Lexical analysis examines the words themselves — their frequency, diversity, and distribution. AI‑generated text tends to exhibit:
- Lower lexical diversity — measured via type–token ratio; AI favors mid‑probability vocabulary.
- Function‑word overuse — glue words like however, moreover, indeed, additionally.
- Uniform vocabulary patterns — humans spike unpredictably into slang, rare words, or idiosyncratic phrasing.
- Rare‑word avoidance — models avoid low‑probability tokens unless prompted.
These signals arise because AI models optimize for clarity and coherence, which pushes them toward “safe,” middle‑probability word choices.
Syntax analysis examines how sentences are built — clause structure, punctuation, and rhythm. AI text often shows:
- Consistent clause length — sentences follow similar patterns and pacing.
- Over‑regular grammar — few deviations, few fragments, few stylistic breaks.
- Predictable transitions — Moreover, In addition, Ultimately, However.
- Low syntactic entropy — humans vary complexity more dramatically.
This uniformity reflects the model’s goal: maximize coherence and minimize confusion.
Perhaps I give less credence to punctuation than I should because the Macintosh option key makes typographical life easy. Instead of two hyphens to simulate an n-dash, option-hyphen plugs in a real dash. Likewise, option-colon drops in a true ellipsis instead of typing three dots.
Even without a Mac, word processors like Microsoft Word performs conversions such as transforming flat quotation marks to curly quotes, thus my reluctance to attach too much attention to perfected punctuation.
That said, AIs sprinkle in more m-dashes than a breathless self-published Mary Sue story. Current AIs throw in a lot of dashes, the really wide ones.
| character | human | proper |
|---|---|---|
| ellipsis | ... | … |
| n-dash | -- | – |
| m-dash | -- | — |
| single quote | ' | ‘’ |
| double quote | " | “” |
Semantic analysis looks at how ideas are organized and expressed. AI text tends to exhibit:
- High semantic consistency — few contradictions or digressions.
- Topic over‑coverage — AI exhaustively lists subtopics to “cover the space.”
- Shallow originality — limited conceptual leaps unless prompted.
- Generic framing — broad, universal statements anchoring paragraphs.
- Low perplexity → predictable → typical of AI
- High perplexity → surprising → typical of humans
- GPTZero
- OpenAI’s classifier
- Cross‑entropy scoring
- Humans show:
- Long sentences
- Short fragments
- Abrupt shifts
- Irregular rhythm
- AI shows:
- Low burstiness
- Smooth, even pacing
- Idiolect — no personal quirks or signature phrasing.
- Stylistic variability — humans shift tone depending on mood, audience, or genre.
- Natural digressions — AI rarely meanders.
- JStylo
- Writeprints
- Signature stylometric analysis
- Perfect paragraph symmetry
- Overuse of enumerated lists — AIs love lists
- Overuse of bulleted lists — Consider this an example
- Predictable section ordering
- Lack of temporal markers — humans reference time, place, personal context.
- GPTZero
- DetectGPT
- Turnitin AI
- Copyleaks
- QuillBot AI
- Grammarly
- HuggingFace detectors
- Soft heuristic detection: “This feels like AI.”
- Hard science-based detection: “Here’s measurable evidence.”
Humans, by contrast, often wander, contradict themselves, or introduce unexpected angles.
Perplexity measures how surprising a passage is to a language model.
AI‑generated text tends to have very low perplexity, because it is produced by the same statistical engine used to measure it. Tools that use perplexity include:
Edited AI text, however, can raise perplexity — making detection harder.
Burstiness measures how much sentence structure varies.
Burstiness is one of the strongest statistical indicators of human authorship, especially in long‑form writing.
Stylometry analyzes the “fingerprint” of an author’s writing style — their idiolect, quirks, and habits. AI text typically lacks:
Stylometric tools include:
These methods are especially powerful given long samples.
Even when prose looks human, structural patterns can reveal AI origin. Common signals include:
These clues often appear in polished AI essays and reports.
Modern detectors combine perplexity, burstiness, stylometry, and semantic analysis. Examples of tools include:
These tools go beyond analyzing basics, they compare text against known AI‑generation patterns.
Part I focused on intuition — tone, phrasing, emotional cadence, suspiciously neutral voice. Part II provides the science — statistical regularities, lexical smoothness, syntactic uniformity, semantic predictability.
Together, they form a dual‑system framework:
This combination is far more reliable than either method alone.
Note: Wikipedia is exceptionally vulnerable to AI contamination. They operate a project to identify and mitigate AI effects. Their article, Signs of AI Writing, is well worth a read.


Really in-depth, Leigh, and worth reading, even if scary! I can't help feeling like all the sci-fi writers I loved from the 50s (Asimov et al) missed the boat about what we really were going to have to deal with. And loathe!
ReplyDeleteThe 1970 novel, The Forbin Project, and its movie, Colossus, deppict the direst consequences. And one of the AI entrepreneurs named his supercomputer Colossus.
Deleteoops - that was Melodie, by the way
DeleteYou can't win for losing. I love that long em dash on my Mac—use it all the time. (It's longer on a Word doc than on this Blogger comment.) On the other hand, I didn't know option colon gave me the true ellipses, and in fact, when I tried it, that's not what I got, but this: ÚÚÚ I also have perfect grammar and punctuation just because I'm wonderful and use curly quotes because they look better—change 'em before I hand anything in. But my real question is, if AI likes unpredictable words, why does it always change them to predictable words when you're trying to shoot off a two-second text and get out the door? Arrrrgh!!!
ReplyDeleteLike you said, Liz… because you're wonderful!
DeleteÚÚÚ… Not sure what's going on, Liz. These show as three separate characters instead of one punctuation (…). What font are you using?
What happens when AI has stolen enough material that its writing exhibits fewer and fewer of these indications? And for writers, proving a negative is difficult, so unless you write longhand or save multiple drafts of your work, I fear the presumption, as AI gets better, will be that it was used.
ReplyDeleteThe AIs are improving as we speak, Tom. I began researching and documenting early in the year and what I uncovered was obsolete within ± two weeks. By the end of the year, most humans might not be able to tell the difference.
DeleteThis is really helpful, Leigh. And scary, and frustrating. I've realized I'm probably in trouble, because, like Liz, I love to do some of the things that look AI-ish, like using a lot of em dashes. (Is "helpful; scary, and frustrating" a triplet?)
ReplyDeleteI hope someone will come up with something like an electric dog collar that'll shock the sh*t out of the writer anytime he attempts to use AI in his story.
John, it feels like we're being slapped for using proper typography. But be careful if you wish to insgtall Google Gemini. It takes over several of those option keys. I can't believe they did that.
DeleteSpeaking of Google, they're now watermarking works they create. Audio and video would be easy, but I'm not sure how they tag plain text.