15 November 2025

Whodunit? Beats Me.


  

All of us who write and sell short stories know there are ups and downs, hills and valleys, boomtimes and dry spells. It's mostly been dry for me lately: I just don't publish as many stories, or as often, as I once did. One reason is that there are fewer short-story markets out there now. Especially markets for mystery stories, which is what I most enjoy writing.

Having said that, I must say that November has started out well. In the first four days of the month, I was fortunate enough to have three stories published--one in Black Cat Weekly, one in a food-themed anthology, and one in an anthology of stories from Strand Magazine. Those three stories have very little in common with each other, except for one thing. (I'll tell you that in a minute.)

The first story, published November 1 in Issue #218 of Black Cat Weekly, was "City Lights," a short, quirky, lighthearted tale about a retired Southern schoolteacher on vacation in New York City. She stops in to visit an old friend from her hometown and--in the process of three or four pages--manages to spot a financial scam and save her friend from falling for it. A simple and (I hope) fun little story.

The second story appeared on November 4 in the anthology Cooking Up Death (Camden Park Press), edited by Lyn Worthen. This story, "Chef's Surprise," features a restaurant owner who runs into a vengeful man from her past, one she knew in name only, and winds up fighting for her life during an otherwise calm Thanksgiving dinner date. Her only weapon is her quick mind, which--as we all know--is sometimes enough. It's a "framed" story, told later by the protagonist to a friend, and is probably more of a suspense/thriller/survival story than anything else.

The third one of these stories was also published November 4, in an anthology called Best of The Strand Magazine: 25 Years of Twists, Turns, and Tales by the Modern Masters of Mystery and Fiction (Blackstone Publishing), edited by Andrew Gulli and Lamia Gulli. I've not yet seen the book or read any of the other stories, but it should be a good one, featuring authors like James Lee Burke, Michael Connelly, Jeffery Deaver, and so on. (How I squeezed in there is anybody's guess.) My story, "Foreverglow," first published in The Strand in 2018, is about a complicated department-store heist of a jewelry collection, told from the POV of one of the robbers.

Is there a point to all this bragging? Yes, believe it or not. I said earlier that these three mystery stories had one thing in common. That shared fact is that none of them is a whodunit. Not even close. There's no list of suspects in any of them, no detective or investigation, and the identity of the villain is never in doubt. And the really funny thing is, if I look back on all the so-called mystery stories I've published over the past thirty years, very few of them are traditional whodunits. Most of my stores are howdunits, whydunits, howcatchems, or howtheygotawaywithits. 

I think that's okay. I always find reassurance by going back to the definition that Otto Penzler refers to in the introductions to his annual best-of anthologies. He says (paraphrasing, here) that a mystery is any story that contains a crime, even it it's only a hint or implication of a crime. It does not have to be a whodunit. Also, a mystery doesn't have to be a murder mystery. I suspect that more than half the stories I've written and sold have been about lesser crimes: robberies, burglaries, kidnappings, blackmail, fraud, etc., etc. 

Some crime-writer friends who don't accept that definition of Otto's have told me they always say they write crime/suspense fiction, not mystery fiction. If that makes them feel better, fine, but I say that's being too restrictive. As I've said, I write more thriller/suspense stories than traditional mystery stories, but just as the mystery section of the bookstore will always contain novels like The Silence of the Lambs and No Country for Old Men, we short-crime writers can always call ourselves mystery writers. It's fun to point out that even though Columbo will always be thought of as a TV mystery series, not one of its 69 episodes was a whodunit. The audience always knew, within the first ten minutes, who the bad guy was--and the fun was in finding out how he got caught. Same thing goes for the recent Poker Face series.

So, what do you think? If you're a crime writer, do you focus mostly on whodunits? Do you, like me, rarely write them? What if you're a reader? (And God knows, every one of us writers better be a reader.) Are whodunits more fun for you to read? If you don't write only whodunits, do you feel that you're stretching the definition a bit when you say you write mysteries? I've already confessed that I don't think so. If pressed, I would say whodunits are a subgenre.


But how should I know? It's all a mystery to me.


30 comments:

  1. Excellent post, John, and congratulations on your tri-publica. I very seldom write a whodunnit or an actual mystery, and, I confess, I generally call myself a "crime writer." I'm leaving for an event in about an hour, and I'm billed that way.

    Whodunnits and literal mysteries are hard for me, probably because linear thinking and, therefore, plotting don't come easily for me (Math was my worst subject in school). Most of my stories involve a character getting involved in trouble and getting out (like your food story above) or, even more often, getting revenge. It's surprising how many of my stories go down that road.

    This has been a good stretch for me, too. I've sold four stories in the last thirty days, a personal best. One actually WAS a mystery, too.

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    1. Good for you, Steve, for those four recent sales!

      Glad to hear someone else in the mystery-writing community leans more toward non-whodunits. I often find myself writing whodunits only when (1) the guidelines or themes demand it or (2) the market itself demands it. I've found it's a bit easier to sell a whodunit than a different kind of mystery to someplace like Woman's World because they like puzzle-stories, and whodunits are always puzzle plots.

      I always found it strange that math was one of my favorite courses in high school (English was not), and yet I somehow wound up doing what I do. Yet another mystery . . .

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  2. Hi John! I can give you the Crime Writers of Canada definition of a mystery vs a suspense or thriller (which was based on publisher definitions):
    In a mystery, there's a mystery. The crime happens toward the beginning of the story, and the story is about the 'solving of the crime' (usually murder, but not always.)
    In a thriller/suspense, the story is about a person in jeopardy, and will he/she escape the crime - the emphasis is on the tension built. We may even know who the villain is.
    In my novels, I write whodunits. In my short stories, I play around a lot with whydunits, howdunits, capers etc! It's all fun. But in my novels, the theme is almost always justice, in one way or another.

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    1. Interesting, Melodie! I never knew that. Sounds like I would NOT meet their definition of a mystery, in most of the stories I write. But I do like for stories to have something concealed until the end or near the end, whether they're whodunits or not. And yes, it's all fun!

      Thanks as always!

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  3. A lot of the material I've submitted to magazines and anthologies are whodunits, but they're not *exclusively* that. One is a heist/kidnapping story. Those involving whodunits are also tied to kidnapping and the characters' personal relationships are also explored.

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    1. Always a good thing to do, Justin. I wish you the very best on all those submissions!

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  4. For novels, I stick to the fair play, detecting, whodunit mode. With shorts, I tend to let my characters run wild. They usually find themselves profoundly changed by either committing a crime or solving one.

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    1. Beverle, that's what Melodie says she does, too. Sounds like you've found what works for you! As for your characters changing as a result of the story, that's what the best fiction, short or long, is supposed to do! Keep doing it!

      Thanks for stopping in at SleuthSayers.

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  5. Thanks for the article, John. I've been on a Lee Child kick lately, and any number of his novels might best be called a "Whatdahellisgoingon." "Echo Burning" is a good example. There are some potential villains watching a house. Then there's a definite trio of killers, so they must also be villains. Probably. But who are all these people, what motivates them, and what connects everything together? Tough to do in the short story world, with too few words/pages to have numerous characters and/or threads, much less let the reader wonder too long what's going on. But then again, you might disagree, being able to suggest (and I'd be interested to know) any in medias res stories where the reader has to sink or swim furiously. Or at least treading water until they can figure out Whatdahellisgoingon.

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    1. Dan, you are so right, about Echo Burning.

      I have read all Child's novels (I like his solo books better than the ones he's done recently, with his brother), and yes, his plots are a bit complex for the short-story world--I don't disagree with you. But we can get pretty convoluted in our plots too. (Sometimes I have to make my characters tread water until *I* figure out whathehellsgoingon.)

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  6. John, whether I call myself a writer of mystery or crime fiction depends on how highbrow the person I'm talking to is, unless I don't care if the highbrows take me seriously or am going for shock value with an intellectual. Don't ask me why "mystery" sounds more lowbrow than "crime" to an intellectual, but it does. I started with whodunits, but once I busted out, my work got not only more interesting to write, but better. Quite a few of my short stories, both flash and long, have turned out to be what I call "murder last," the death being the punch line.

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    1. Liz, I agree. Mystery does sound more lowbrow--though it shouldn't. (Picture Rodney saying, "They just don't get no respect.") And yes, I too sometimes wind up having the crime last.

      I honestly believe that varying the "kind" of crime stories you write can make them more marketable (at least to certain publications--not a single one of my stories in EQMM has been a whodunit, and very few of them in the Strand have been, also). I think "different" can be good. But, as I think was said earlier, there are some markets that want puzzle-type stories, and whodunits work well there.

      Whatever you're doing, it seems to be working!

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  7. Not to be cynical (practical?) about it, but I tend to call my work whatever the submissions guidelines are looking for. When asked by friends what I'm doing in my retirement, however, I say I write mystery stories.

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    1. Floyd, I think that's practical. (And sneaky. No, just kiddin'.) I too tell folks I write mystery stories.

      If that puzzles them, that's okay--I'm supposed to be mysterious.

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    2. I feel frustrated about the whole mystery/crime thing because most of the people who bring it up look down on the trash they call "genre" fiction. You know, garbage like Oedipus the King, Hamlet, Macbeth, Othello, Chaucer's The Pardoner's Tale, The Oresteia, Our Mutual Friend, Murder in the Cathedral, Intruder in the Dust, Pudd'nhead Wilson, All The King's Men...

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    3. Steve, that's always happened and probably always will. Grisham has said he ignores it. I've heard that kind of arrogance bothered Stephen King until he published a short story called (I think) "The Man in the Black Suit" in the New Yorker--and also his novel Bag of Bones, which many felt was more literary fiction than genre.

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  8. John, thanks for tackling this sometimes confusing subject! For years, I wrote only whodunnits because that’s what I was taught WAS a mystery. I took workshops by three best-selling mystery authors who had numerous books under their belt, and they all followed the same rules. The books highly recommended in those classes also fit the rules. But they were all written by novelists, NOT short story writers.

    When I switched from writing novels and embraced short fiction, and more importantly, reading only short stories, I started running into some that didn’t fit that mold or the “rules” I had been taught. They were crime stories, suspense, whatevers, all published in the big magazines. Very few were whodunnits.

    I still struggle with the issue of avoiding those rules—and it’s not been easy. I finally broke away by writing some revenge stories, where the murder comes at the end. Perhaps they’d fit more into “crime,” but in my mind, I’ll always be a mystery writer, even though some of those involve ghosts, strange or spooky things. :-D

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    1. Bobbi -- Since I didn't start out with novels, I didn't have that struggle: It was easy for me to avoid the whodunit rules. Either way, though, I agree that we're both mystery writers. (And I *love* the spooky, strange, otherworldly mysteries.)

      Thanks for the thoughts!

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  9. When I submit a story I identify it as a "crime" story whether it's a whodunit, suspense, mystery or whatever. Of course, if thre is no crime, or threat of a crime, I simply say "attached is my 4,000 word short story." I enjoy reading whodunits, and enjoy writing them, but most of my fiction doesn't fall into that category.

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    1. Bob, they *are* all crime stories (just as they also are all mystery stories). And, like you, I always say in my cover letter, if my story doesn't contain a crime, "Please consider the attached short story." But I don't write many, these days, that don't contain a crime.

      Just wish there were more places for us to send these mystery/crime stories . . .

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  11. Whatever you call yours, they're always good! My cozy series novels ARE whodunnits, because that's what's expected, but I like to take my short stories all over the place. I love your other categories, howdunits, whydunits, howcatchems, or howtheygotawaywithits.

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    1. Kaye you're right, those cozies have rules, and that's okay because it's what your readers expect! And, as you and others have said, the shorts allow you to do whatever you want.

      I really think most of my stories fall in the howcatchem bin--those and the howdunits.

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  12. I write whodunits, whydunits, the occasional thriller, and otherworldlies (like the Crow Woman stories and "Round and Round", a ghost story set in prison, in Michael Bracken's 'Janie's Got a Gun' anthology). They're all fun.

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    1. Eve, I loved "Round and Round." Truth is, I liked just about every story in that Janie anthology--and many of the reviewers did too!

      And we haven't said enough about the otherworldlies--those have always been fun to write, for you and me both. I'm pleased that a few of the still-existing markets, like AHMM and Black Cat Weekly, are receptive to those. I was a little surprised a couple of years ago when AHMM published one of my science fiction stories--but it did!

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  13. I never seriously thought about this before.

    I have submitted over 80 stories to the AHMM Mysterious Photograph Contest. The rules say each story must include a crime. I just went through and did some counting. The most common crime was murder: 46 stories. Theft: 21. Kidnapping: 8. Other categories were 1 to 3 each. And out of all of them only four were mysteries in the sense of somebody had to figure out who had done something. Of course, I only had a maximum of 250 words per story. Beyond the contest I see I have written about eight longer stories that included a crime, of which six were mysteries.

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    1. Thank you for this! I'm so pleased to hear those statistics about the Mysterious Photograph Contest. I'm not too surprised that murder accounts for most of the stories there, but I am surprised that it makes up more than half! For some reason I figured there would be more thefts--robberies, burglaries, fraud, etc.--than there are.

      Congrats on sending them so many of those 250-word stories! I wish you the best with those, in the future.

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  14. Great topic, John! I like writing a traditional whodunit, but it’s hard to do in a short story because of word economy—for there to REALLY be a twist or confusion about the perp, there has to be more than one plausible suspect, which can be hard to do in a story with only a small amount of space to spread out and introduce characters. I like why- or howdunits better when I write short stories that are mysteries. I also enjoy writing straight up crime fiction, where we know someone is bad news (or figure it out pretty quickly) and the focus is on what they’ve done or what they’re about to do. I really like writing both, though, and it’s a fun challenge to try to squeeze a true whodunit into a short story. I’m behind in reading my BCW issues but definitely want to go read your story from the 11/1 issue!
    Ashley Bernier

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    1. Ashley, if you find and read that story, I hope you'll like it--it's definitely not a whodunit.

      I feel as you do, about the fun of trying to fit certain things into the plot of a short story. The longer the story is, the easier it is, but even flash fiction can pack several twists into the plot. Even if you're a longer writer, I think the shorts can teach us a lot about tight writing, and how every word must count.

      Thanks as always for your insights.

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