10 October 2023

Stop throwing shade on "write what you know"


If there's writerly advice that's ever received a bad rap, it is "write what you know."

Yep, as predictedI see 'emthe pitchforks are coming out. Mention "write what you know" and many people will roll their eyes at such a stupid suggestion, wishing you and your bad advice would crawl back under a rock. But I'm here today to make a spirited defense of this misunderstood advice. 

Let's think about why this advice is often given. There could be other reasons, but I imagine these two are foremost in the minds of WWYK (let's use the acronym or we could be here all day) advocates:

Reason 1: Newer writers may feel intimidated, wanting to write but not sure what to write about, so teachers try to make them feel comfortable and encourage them to write about something they know about, something they've experienced. Ask me to write a short story involving a rocket engineer who's going about his workday, and I certainly wouldn't begin typing eagerly, because I don't know anything about how rocket engineers spend their day. But ask me to write a story about a newspaper reporter working in the 1990s and I could put my fingers to my keyboard immediately. That's what I did for a living back then.

Reason 2: Readers like to be able to sink into a story when they're reading, to lose themselves, not even realizing they're turning the pages. One thing that will interfere with thisthat will throw readers out of a story, if not make them want to throw the book out of a windowis if the story has incorrect details. How many times have you, dear reader, stopped reading to mutter, "That's not right. That's not how it works!"? Things like that take the enjoyment out of reading. When you write about things you don't know about, you're likely to get details wrong. But if you WWYK, this is less likely.

I can hear some of you grumbling that fiction involves making things up, so WWYK shouldn't apply. I disagree. Your story should come from your imagination, but your details should be true to life unless you've made clear that you are writing about an alternate reality. Want to write a historical novel set in 1800 that refers back to our first president, John Adams? Even if you have the most rocking story, readers likely will skewer you for not knowing the first US president was George Washingtonunless you've made clear that your story involves alternate history. Like it or not, details matter.

Butand here comes the important partthis doesn't mean that you should only write about things you've experienced. It doesn't mean you can't write stories set before you were born or involving things you haven't done. It means if you want to write about such things, you should do enough research so you get your details right (see Reason 2). (I don't doubt that some people have said writers should only write about things they've experienced firsthand, but I think such advice is misguided and hopefully a rarity.)

So, want to write about a character who's a rocket engineer but you're not? Then do your research so you'll get the details about her workday correct. Want to write about a big-city environmental attorney but you're not sure what such a person does or even what the inside of a large law firm looks like? Once again: do your research. 

Once you've done your research, you'll know the ins and outs of whatever it is you want to write about. You'll be more comfortable starting to type, and your readers will be in better hands when you finish.

That's the real beauty of WWYK. Once you've done your research, you'll be able to get your details right because you'll KNOW them. Then you can write about anything.

27 comments:

  1. Good advice. Only one reservation: it can be easier to enjoy the research more than sitting down to write!

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  2. Barb, my first story sold to AHMM was set in the opium fields in the Golden Triangle of Southeast Asia. I had never been there and had never met an opium warlord face-to-face , but I had been next door in the mountain jungles of Vietnam in '67-'68, plus copies of articles on those warlords in the South China Morning Post crossed my work desk along with agency reports on those same warlords. So, I guess you could say that I extrapolated all that info along with personal experience to write what I know. Seven more stories in the same environment were subsequently published in AHMM. So, yep, find a way to know what to write about.

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    1. Exactly. You mixed first-hand experience with research, and then your imagination was free to run wild.

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  3. If you're going to set a story in a place and time and occupation you know nothing about, then you'd better do the research. But I've heard people worry because "I've lived such a quiet life, how can I write ___?" Well, if you've ever been angry, jealous, happy, ecstatic, vengeful - all you have to do is amp those emotions up and down to suit. We all know what it's like to be human.

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    1. This is true. A couple of years ago I wrote a story about a rockstar, and I was concerned that I didn't know enough about rockstars to get the story right--to understand the character correctly. But then I realized that deep down he's a human being just like me, and I could work from there. I did a little research to learn some details that I needed as well as to get the terminology right, and I was good to go.

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  4. Great column, Barb! I am a firm believer in 'write what you know' for your first works, particularly. It's enough to have to concentrate on your newly learned writing skills, without also fact checking every single paragraph. So after you've had some publications, I then suggest 'write what you WANT to know' - that is, pick a subject that you are eager to research to put into your work, because you cannot skip that step (reasearch) and become a professional writer.

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  5. I worked for the Postal Servie for 37 years and many of my stories use that experience, whether it's a major part of the plot (whch I've done in some published stories), or just a character who works for the Post Office. But I've also written and pubished stories that have nothing to do with my former place of employment and require research. So, I go both ways.
    Bob

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    1. That makes perfect sense, Bob. You don't have to do one or the other.

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  6. Oh my... I get this now. It's really meant to be, 'Write What You Know However It Is That You Legitimately Come To Know It.' I absolutely love that this includes coming to know something through solid and thorough research. Thank you for this post, Barb.

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    1. You're welcome, Pamela. I'm happy to be helpful!

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  7. Marilyn Levinson10 October, 2023 15:58

    Ah, research! Sometimes I've written no more than half a sentence when I have to visit my good friend Google.

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  8. It's great advice, Barb, but aI'm afraid to write about what I know.

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  9. Sorry - Mary Seifert here (Anonymous) and I love your information. Thanks.

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  10. Don't forget Write What You Know You Know--make sure you're not making an incorrect assumption. (I'm thinking of the scene in My Cousin Vinny, in which Joe Pesci and Marisa Tomei argue about whether the bathroom faucet is dripping because she didn't twist the knob firmly enough or if it's broken, with him continually testing what she says with, "Are you sure?")

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  11. A friend was horrified when one of her favorite writers described a particular car wrong in a novel. Apparently said friend spent a lot of time in the back seat of that particular model, and she wrote the author. The author wrote back that SHE was intimately familiar with the aforementioned vehicle, so there!

    The premise of your article is exactly right, Barb. One of the minor 19th century classics was set in Russia. I've long forgotten the title and author, but Cliff Notes praised the writer for such thorough research, that it was impossible for Russian natives to tell he'd never visited the nation. Perhaps the author knew nothing before he started writing, but by the time he'd finished a deep dive study, he knew it very well indeed.

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    1. I think I have an explanation to the backseat inconsistency: One of those people was a bit more distracted than the other and thus doesn't remember exactly right. (Who you're in the backseat with can make a big difference!)

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    2. (chuckling) Barb, I think you nailed it.

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    3. Yes, memories of the back seat are rarely clear as to exactly where the ashtray was or what kind of piping was on the upholstery...

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  12. I think this is excellent advice. If I haven't experienced something I want to write about, I research like crazy and check it out with those who can correct or verify. But everyone has had enough life experience to know things to write about. You just have to mine your memories.

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    1. Thanks, Chris. And yes, I mine my memories a lot.

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  13. I feel that so much comes down to emotional truth. For better or for worse, several times now, I've written a story based on some life event that someone close to me shared, something that I never experienced but couldn't forget either. I asked a very successful ghost writer how he managed to write about things far from his own experiences, and he said he focused on his own imagination and putting as much of himself in the work as he could.

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    1. I agree. Emotional truth is so important in making characters come alive and to having a story that resonates. But it doesn't negate the importance of getting the detalis right.

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