17 November 2012
Big Words and Little Words
by Elizabeth Zelvin
"He has never been known to use a word that might send a reader to the dictionary."
- William Faulkner (about Ernest Hemingway).
"Poor Faulkner. Does he really think big emotions come from big words?"
- Ernest Hemingway (about William Faulkner)
Besides being clever, these two statements express a profound philosophical gulf between two kinds of writing. As a college English major in the early 1960s, I found Hemingway’s language too plain and Faulkner’s so ornamented as to make the stories he was telling incomprehensible.
That is not to say that I reject plain diction. As a poet for thirty years, I was proud that no reader ever said to me, “I didn’t understand your poem.” My second book of poetry, if I remember correctly, contained only seven words of four or more syllables. Nor have I ever been afraid of “big words.” As a kid, I could rattle off “antidisestablishmentarianism” with the best of them.
Since my college days, the English language and its literature has endured what I consider the toxic embrace of Deconstructionism, with its irritatingly opaque invented vocabulary. (Can you explain what “semiotics” means?) Thank goodness that instead of going on for my doctorate, I ran away and joined the Peace Corps—and discovered mysteries and other genre fiction. I’m told that Deconstructionism lasted longer in American academia than anywhere else. And yet it’s Hemingway whose approach to language has triumphed. With my own ears, I’ve heard Stephen King (very much a writer’s writer) declare that his advice to aspiring writers is, “Read, read, read; write, write, write—and lose the adverbs.”
In the past few years, in the process of developing my craft to the point where I realize that the ability to self-critique is a never-ending process, I have come to understand what’s wrong with adverbial writing. Those tough action verbs can serve the writer well. But I still think it’s pretty weird for the arbiters of language to shun an entire part of speech. I have enjoyed reading work in which adverbs are used deliciously and evocatively to enhance the meat and potatoes of nouns and verbs. So it’s a different style. So what? Why not?
Hemingway and Faulkner, like cozies and noir, are too often assumed to be the only alternatives. Let’s hear it for the middle ground. Language can be rich without losing the reader and strong without being stripped stark naked. But what’s really dangerous is allowing any one literary style to be considered the only right way to write. By all means, let expansive writers rein themselves in by deleting adverbs and replacing Latinate words with their Anglo-Saxon-based equivalents. But let’s also invite the hard-boiled heirs of Hemingway to spread themselves a little. Stick in a couple of adverbs on every page, if not every sentence. Go on, try it. You might find it’s fun.
16 November 2012
The Power of Babeu
by Dixon Hill
Well, the elections are behind us… almost.
In Arizona, as I write this, there are still about 100,000 uncounted ballots. These are a mix of Early Ballots and Provisional Ballots – both of which must be counted by hand for some reason. And, because of this, the fate of a house seat in Tucson still remains too close to call. The difference at the moment: less than 300 votes.
And all those uncounted ballots wait, no one knowing how many will effect this particular race.
Interesting, isn’t it?
I have to tell you: I don’t relish the campaign season.
But, I LOVE voting.
I don’t vote early. I don’t vote often (only once in each election! lol). And…
I vote at the polls.
In my district, that means I go to a little church on 82nd Street in Scottsdale, less than a half-mile from my home.
As I approach, I see the front lawn is filled with campaign signs for every party: Republican, Democrat, Libertarian, Green, and a few others I can’t even recall. They sprout like strange vegetation, mixed with signs supporting or condemning certain propositions.
The signs grow so thick I can’t see the grass on either side of the drive as I turn my Jeep into the little church entrance. But they stop abruptly at the “75-Foot Limit” sign.
The campaigning goes right on up to that imaginary line demarcated by those signs. That far, and no farther. On the other side? Campaign respite. The peace of voting one’s conscience.
When I pass the 75-foot limit, I always feel it. An invisible cloak of Americana, the pleasure of voting at the polls, descends upon me once more. And I’m not the only one.
As I pilot my jeep forward, other folks are walking out. They wear little stickers that proclaim: “I Voted.” I smile at them. They smile at me. Big smiles! bursting with more than a simple greeting. Those smiles they wear are filled with joy, temporary abandonment of strife. Recognition of a fellow traveler. They and I may be voting diametrically opposed tickets – opposites in every category. But, in that moment, it doesn’t matter. We’re united by a bond of fraternity that runs much deeper than politics. A fraternity created by the very Americanism of the practice we’re here to participate in on this fateful day. We– from all walks and all parties– are united, celebrating this distinctly American style of practice, inherent from our forbearers. In that moment– the moment just before and after the act of voting– we’re neither Democrat nor Republican, Green nor Libertarian.
We’re American. And I LOVE IT!
I see it and feel it, as I pass those who are finished, as I walk from my parked jeep to the voting line. There is an energy here, a silent buzzing of excitement, of greatness grown from the common person. We stand in line, young and old. The youngest rock back and forth from heels to toes, in anticipation.
I’m telling you, I’m not making this up—it happened! It happened this year. Less than a half-mile from my house. I saw a young guy, maybe 19 or 20, standing in line at the polls. And I wasn’t sure his clothing could hold him in because he was so filled with swirling energy, bursting excitement. Silent old ladies, they smiled at him and he nodded and smiled back. Somebody made a small quip, and that was all it took. Laughter rang out up and down the line. Laughter—that pressure valve that lets off the excess energy steaming up inside each of us.
I laughed too. You would have, if you’d been there. I’m sure of it. It wasn’t something a person could help. It just… came out. A great peal of laughter. The designer of the Liberty Bell would have given all he had to craft a bell that made such a sound. But, the hands of man are small, while the excitements of voters are huge. And perfect.
Maybe it didn’t work this way in your hometown, or at your polling place. If that’s the case, I’m sorry to hear it. Because, I know what you’re missing. Thankfully, here in Arizona, it’s easy to register to vote. You can even do it online at the Department of Motor Vehicles website. And, for those who speak Spanish and might not have internet access, tons of small businesses thrive throughout The Valley, where Spanish-speaking shop owners provide DMV services – including voter registration – to anyone who comes through the door. At the polls, the Spanish language ballots are stacked right beside the English language ballots. I know; I got one by accident this year, and had to trade it in for an English language ballot.
The voting I described above – that’s the way it went this year at my polling place. And, that’s the way it’s gone every time I’ve voted at the polls. I really missed that feeling when I was in the Army. Living in another state, I had to vote by Absentee Ballot, and that was a lonely, singular disappointment each time.
That’s why I reveled in hitting the ballots that very first time I was back, after getting out of the Army in 1994. It felt, in some strange and inexplicable way, like coming home again. I was struck by a feeling identical to the one I felt when my U-Haul truck topped that last cactus-studded rise before I dropped down into the great Valley of the Sun, as I made my long way home from Fort Bragg for the last time, and saw Phoenix laid out across the panorama before me. The way I felt when I smelled that scent of desiccated desert dust, the smell of home and hearth, of childhood and all I love about the world rising up to swamp my senses. That feeling rose up from the voting booth floor and engulfed me, all over again.
If problems make it so it doesn’t work this way in your hometown, or at your polling place, I wish you Godspeed in getting things changed! Because everyone deserves the chance to vote his/her conscience.
That’s the thing that counts, in my book.
After over thirty years of voting, I've decided: The people we vote for? I have to tell you, I don’t think it matters much. Politicians don't run the world; they just think they do. The people who vote – they’re the one’s who count.
Maybe you disagree. And, if so, that's fine by me. It's your business; not mine. After all, you have your beliefs. And, I fully support your right to believe what you want. It's no skin off my nose. And, it's a large part of the reason I spent roughly a decade of my life dragging an M-16 or M-203 around the jungle or through the bush.
Maybe you didn't even vote. Maybe you've never voted. Some folks might condemn you for that. I won't. It's your business; not mine. Nor anyone else's. Just yours.
As for me, though --
I love to vote!
My 23-year-old son left the house soon after I arrived home from the polls. He's young, he has tatoos, and he enjoys skateboarding in the sun. He rode his skateboard the short distance to that church. And, he came home wearing the same “I Voted” sticker I had stuck to my shirt. He didn’t vote for everybody or everything I did. But, let me tell you something.
I DON’T CARE!
My son is a voter. And that’s what counts, to me. He's part of the fraternity.
Later, my wife returned from work. She wore the same “I Voted” sticker. She voted a different ticket from mine in many respects. But, let me reiterate.
I DON’T CARE! It’s the voters who count. And, the act of voting. Who we vote for pales by comparative importance, in my opinion. I honestly don't believe it matters all that much. The fraternity of voters -- they're the ones who count.
On the other hand, if my wife had chosen not to vote, I wouldn't have run her over with our car or jeep. Voting is a personal decision, in my opinion. A personal choice. It has to be, or I believe it's meaningless. If you're chased to the polls, or forced to pull the lever at gun point -- that's not voting. It's coercion. Even if the person forcing you into it, isn't trying to make you choose a certain candidate or cause.
That's the way I see it.
Now, I promised to take some of Florida’s heat off of Leigh…
So let me tell you that here in my home county– Maricopa County, a body of land larger than the state of New Jersey – Sheriff Joe Arpaio, the man somebody dubbed “The Toughest Sheriff in America” (and I strongly suspect this sobriquet is emblazoned across the Arpaio’s bed head) was reelected by a whoppingly huge margin, once again, this year. Even though Joe is now 80 years old.
So, all you Sheriff Joe haters can now stop griping at Florida, and turn your attention to Arizona. Because, I can assure you, there is no way on Earth that old man is going to stop rounding up Illegal Aliens. He doesn’t care that the Justice Department sued him over it; he’s not going to stop. Believe me, Ol’ Joe cares a lot more about seeing his face in the papers, than he cares about a DoJ lawsuit. That’s the way he’s built. And, the surest way to keep his face on the front page, these days, is to keep rounding up Illegal Aliens. The only way he’d stop, is if we ignored it. Then he’d have to get his deputies started on some other controversial practice, so he could get press coverage again.
But, on to a more interesting Sheriff – rumored to be just as tough as old Arpaio, but running a county just south of here.
This man is Sheriff Paul Babeu (BAB-you), the sheriff of Pinal County– Arizona's third largest county with an area that's nearly the size of Connecticut.
Babeu, originally from Massachusets, has been Pinal's sheriff since 2008 (the first Republican elected Sheriff in Pinal– ever!). And, when it comes to illegal immigration, he's just as tough as his Maricopa counterpart– perhaps even tougher.
Perhaps with good cause, as Pinal County is recognized as one of the most heavily traversed counties in the U.S., when it comes to human or drug smuggling. Cartels reportedly maintain listening and observation posts in the county to facilitate the flow of narcotics and other illegal goods, while Babeu and his 700 deputies try to stop them.
Oh, and one other thing ....
Babeu's bid for congress, earlier this year, was cut short when an ex-boyfriend claimed that Babeu had threatened to have the guy deported if he outed Babeu. Babeu denies the claim, saying the only factual part of it is that he is gay, and the fellow was a lover at one time.
That's right. Babeu is gay.
The guy's a hard-core sheriff in a county that's fighting drug and human traffickers on a daily basis, he was a Major in the Arizona Army National Guard who spent a tour in Iraq, he's Republican, and he's as gay as they come, saying he made no secret of his life style and that, "People who knew me, knew I was gay. I didn't hide it."
What do I think? I think having a macho, ass-kicking, hard-charging gay sheriff in my state is GREAT! If I lived in Pinal County, I'd vote for Babeu in a heartbeat. I liked him before I knew he was gay, but– and I can't explain why– I like him even better now. Which is strange, because– as my wife can testify– I'm not necessarily known for going around touting gay rights. In fact, that's one area where our votes often conflicted on past ballots. But, discovering that Sheriff Babeu is gay has me reconsidering.
Maybe the next time a gay marriage initiative comes up I'll vote "Aye!"
After all, a hard-charging gay sheriff deserves the state's sanctity, when somebody kisses him hello at home, after a long day of fighting bad guys.
That's my view, and if it's different from yours . . . well, that's what makes the world a fun place to live in.
So, here's to you, and to wishing you: Many happy votings in the future!
—Dixon
In Arizona, as I write this, there are still about 100,000 uncounted ballots. These are a mix of Early Ballots and Provisional Ballots – both of which must be counted by hand for some reason. And, because of this, the fate of a house seat in Tucson still remains too close to call. The difference at the moment: less than 300 votes.
And all those uncounted ballots wait, no one knowing how many will effect this particular race.
Interesting, isn’t it?
I have to tell you: I don’t relish the campaign season.
But, I LOVE voting.
I don’t vote early. I don’t vote often (only once in each election! lol). And…
I vote at the polls.
In my district, that means I go to a little church on 82nd Street in Scottsdale, less than a half-mile from my home.
As I approach, I see the front lawn is filled with campaign signs for every party: Republican, Democrat, Libertarian, Green, and a few others I can’t even recall. They sprout like strange vegetation, mixed with signs supporting or condemning certain propositions.
The signs grow so thick I can’t see the grass on either side of the drive as I turn my Jeep into the little church entrance. But they stop abruptly at the “75-Foot Limit” sign.
The campaigning goes right on up to that imaginary line demarcated by those signs. That far, and no farther. On the other side? Campaign respite. The peace of voting one’s conscience.
When I pass the 75-foot limit, I always feel it. An invisible cloak of Americana, the pleasure of voting at the polls, descends upon me once more. And I’m not the only one.
As I pilot my jeep forward, other folks are walking out. They wear little stickers that proclaim: “I Voted.” I smile at them. They smile at me. Big smiles! bursting with more than a simple greeting. Those smiles they wear are filled with joy, temporary abandonment of strife. Recognition of a fellow traveler. They and I may be voting diametrically opposed tickets – opposites in every category. But, in that moment, it doesn’t matter. We’re united by a bond of fraternity that runs much deeper than politics. A fraternity created by the very Americanism of the practice we’re here to participate in on this fateful day. We– from all walks and all parties– are united, celebrating this distinctly American style of practice, inherent from our forbearers. In that moment– the moment just before and after the act of voting– we’re neither Democrat nor Republican, Green nor Libertarian.
We’re American. And I LOVE IT!
I see it and feel it, as I pass those who are finished, as I walk from my parked jeep to the voting line. There is an energy here, a silent buzzing of excitement, of greatness grown from the common person. We stand in line, young and old. The youngest rock back and forth from heels to toes, in anticipation.
I’m telling you, I’m not making this up—it happened! It happened this year. Less than a half-mile from my house. I saw a young guy, maybe 19 or 20, standing in line at the polls. And I wasn’t sure his clothing could hold him in because he was so filled with swirling energy, bursting excitement. Silent old ladies, they smiled at him and he nodded and smiled back. Somebody made a small quip, and that was all it took. Laughter rang out up and down the line. Laughter—that pressure valve that lets off the excess energy steaming up inside each of us.
I laughed too. You would have, if you’d been there. I’m sure of it. It wasn’t something a person could help. It just… came out. A great peal of laughter. The designer of the Liberty Bell would have given all he had to craft a bell that made such a sound. But, the hands of man are small, while the excitements of voters are huge. And perfect.
Maybe it didn’t work this way in your hometown, or at your polling place. If that’s the case, I’m sorry to hear it. Because, I know what you’re missing. Thankfully, here in Arizona, it’s easy to register to vote. You can even do it online at the Department of Motor Vehicles website. And, for those who speak Spanish and might not have internet access, tons of small businesses thrive throughout The Valley, where Spanish-speaking shop owners provide DMV services – including voter registration – to anyone who comes through the door. At the polls, the Spanish language ballots are stacked right beside the English language ballots. I know; I got one by accident this year, and had to trade it in for an English language ballot.
The voting I described above – that’s the way it went this year at my polling place. And, that’s the way it’s gone every time I’ve voted at the polls. I really missed that feeling when I was in the Army. Living in another state, I had to vote by Absentee Ballot, and that was a lonely, singular disappointment each time.
That’s why I reveled in hitting the ballots that very first time I was back, after getting out of the Army in 1994. It felt, in some strange and inexplicable way, like coming home again. I was struck by a feeling identical to the one I felt when my U-Haul truck topped that last cactus-studded rise before I dropped down into the great Valley of the Sun, as I made my long way home from Fort Bragg for the last time, and saw Phoenix laid out across the panorama before me. The way I felt when I smelled that scent of desiccated desert dust, the smell of home and hearth, of childhood and all I love about the world rising up to swamp my senses. That feeling rose up from the voting booth floor and engulfed me, all over again.
If problems make it so it doesn’t work this way in your hometown, or at your polling place, I wish you Godspeed in getting things changed! Because everyone deserves the chance to vote his/her conscience.
That’s the thing that counts, in my book.
After over thirty years of voting, I've decided: The people we vote for? I have to tell you, I don’t think it matters much. Politicians don't run the world; they just think they do. The people who vote – they’re the one’s who count.
Maybe you disagree. And, if so, that's fine by me. It's your business; not mine. After all, you have your beliefs. And, I fully support your right to believe what you want. It's no skin off my nose. And, it's a large part of the reason I spent roughly a decade of my life dragging an M-16 or M-203 around the jungle or through the bush.
Maybe you didn't even vote. Maybe you've never voted. Some folks might condemn you for that. I won't. It's your business; not mine. Nor anyone else's. Just yours.
As for me, though --
I love to vote!
My 23-year-old son left the house soon after I arrived home from the polls. He's young, he has tatoos, and he enjoys skateboarding in the sun. He rode his skateboard the short distance to that church. And, he came home wearing the same “I Voted” sticker I had stuck to my shirt. He didn’t vote for everybody or everything I did. But, let me tell you something.
I DON’T CARE!
My son is a voter. And that’s what counts, to me. He's part of the fraternity.
Later, my wife returned from work. She wore the same “I Voted” sticker. She voted a different ticket from mine in many respects. But, let me reiterate.
I DON’T CARE! It’s the voters who count. And, the act of voting. Who we vote for pales by comparative importance, in my opinion. I honestly don't believe it matters all that much. The fraternity of voters -- they're the ones who count.
On the other hand, if my wife had chosen not to vote, I wouldn't have run her over with our car or jeep. Voting is a personal decision, in my opinion. A personal choice. It has to be, or I believe it's meaningless. If you're chased to the polls, or forced to pull the lever at gun point -- that's not voting. It's coercion. Even if the person forcing you into it, isn't trying to make you choose a certain candidate or cause.
That's the way I see it.
Now, I promised to take some of Florida’s heat off of Leigh…
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Maricopa County (in red) |
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Sheriff Joe wearing his standard expression. |
But, on to a more interesting Sheriff – rumored to be just as tough as old Arpaio, but running a county just south of here.
This man is Sheriff Paul Babeu (BAB-you), the sheriff of Pinal County– Arizona's third largest county with an area that's nearly the size of Connecticut.
Babeu, originally from Massachusets, has been Pinal's sheriff since 2008 (the first Republican elected Sheriff in Pinal– ever!). And, when it comes to illegal immigration, he's just as tough as his Maricopa counterpart– perhaps even tougher.
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Pinal County (in red) |
Oh, and one other thing ....
Babeu's bid for congress, earlier this year, was cut short when an ex-boyfriend claimed that Babeu had threatened to have the guy deported if he outed Babeu. Babeu denies the claim, saying the only factual part of it is that he is gay, and the fellow was a lover at one time.
That's right. Babeu is gay.
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Sheriff Paul Babeu |
What do I think? I think having a macho, ass-kicking, hard-charging gay sheriff in my state is GREAT! If I lived in Pinal County, I'd vote for Babeu in a heartbeat. I liked him before I knew he was gay, but– and I can't explain why– I like him even better now. Which is strange, because– as my wife can testify– I'm not necessarily known for going around touting gay rights. In fact, that's one area where our votes often conflicted on past ballots. But, discovering that Sheriff Babeu is gay has me reconsidering.
Maybe the next time a gay marriage initiative comes up I'll vote "Aye!"
After all, a hard-charging gay sheriff deserves the state's sanctity, when somebody kisses him hello at home, after a long day of fighting bad guys.
That's my view, and if it's different from yours . . . well, that's what makes the world a fun place to live in.
So, here's to you, and to wishing you: Many happy votings in the future!
—Dixon
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15 November 2012
Distractions
Distractions are everywhere. Sometimes, I just want to sit and read, but other things prod me from doing what I want. As an adult, a parent, an employee, I am forced to be responsible.
Reading has to take a back seat and wait its turn, I remind myself.
As an American, I was responsible in making sure I was aware of the politics in the election year (which began immediately following the last presidential election). That took some time away from frivolous "fun" reading.

With relief, I head back to the book stack on my nightstand. I think while I was busy with life, it multiplied like rabbits. There seemed to be more, and then I remember dear friends who gifted me with their newest "must-read" they wanted to share. I see the book I had gravitated to following a coffee date with another writer at the book store cafe. Another nonfiction to better my life scrunched next to my water pitcher is now garnering my attention. All are inviting, but which to read first?
While I am pondering, I decide to check my e-mail. I'm awaiting news of a sale to a magazine, but when that particular e-mail isn't in the queue, I let my fingers wander down the list in hopes of something that really interests me, but all I see are claims to make my penis larger (good luck with that one!), send me photos of single people in my area (I'm very married!) and web site sales that I may have purchased from once a long time ago (If I haven't been back, I am probably not interested in your merchandise!)
Still, the Internet has dangled its distraction and before I know it I am headfirst in social media.

When my stomach growls, I glance at the clock and am surprised to see it is past lunch. I have spent too much time finding out where my friends ate lunch and seeing photos of said lunch while I obviously missed mine.Very little good has come from my time "checking in with my pals" only to see what restaurants they preferred today.
Already online, I decide to take a short break and get something to satisfy my cravings and refill my coffee cup. The snack is another diversion as I end up cleaning out the vegetable drawer. While I'm in the vacinity, I shove a load of laundry into the washer.
Back at the computer, I promise myself to stop dawdling and get to work. When I find I am on Google yet again, I tell myself I will find something to ignite an idea to help me write the Sleuthsayer column. Instead, I am distracted away from writing ideas to read a short article about how to better invest my time and energies to uncomplicate my life. This seems like something I should research, but in the end, it is simply the same-old, same-old: make a priority list, stick to it, pat yourself on the back. I wish I had the time back while I was procrastinating in disguise. Guilt creeps over me like syrup on a waffle. Nothing to do but shake it off and vow to do better with time management.
I make a decision to give it a try. I sit down and prioritize everything I need to do for the rest of the day.
I have placed reading at the bottom of the list. It is certainly not really at the bottom of my list, but it seems so selfish to not finish up all the "chores" of life before giving into the relaxation to sit and simply read.
Life is supposed to be full of living and yet, I am filling it with loathing chores and relinquishing true enjoyment to the margins of my existence. Why? Because that's what I am supposed to do? Who says?
I leave the computer, put the washer load into the dryer, turn my cellphone off and refill my coffee cup. Returning to the list of Things to do Today, I grab a red pen and deliberately re-number the list from top to bottom giving priorities a massive shake-up.

I am not completely throwing caution to the winds; there are a few rules to keep the whole thing more honest. The reading must come from my nightstand stack. I can't allow myself to buy new until I read what I have. And, yes, I do have to do the laundry eventually.
I reach for the mystery magazine. I will read just one story and then I will see what other Sleuthsayers have to share.
After that, I am required to do something on the To Do List that originally took precendence. That seems only fair.
I feel in control and better already. What a wonderful way to start each day.
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14 November 2012
ALAN FURST: The World at Night
by David Edgerley Gates
[I had thought to preempt this post with remarks about SKYFALL, the newest Bond picture, the best in years, and I decided, not; or to comment about the fall of David Petraeus, but anything I had to say would be speculation at this point.]
Alan Furst, no more than Charles McCarry, shouldn’t need an introduction, or at least I hope not. He was, for a time, something of an acquired taste, but then a hot agent got ahold of him, he jumped publishers, and they turned him into a household name, at least in my household.
He himself names Eric Ambler as a chief influence, and you can easily see it. The darkened Polish railway stations, or perhaps French, the dubious alliances, the quiet men in the shadows who admit no loyalty either way, or the loud patriots that generally don’t survive chapter two. This is the slippery no-man’s-land of real espionage.
The earlier books, NIGHT SOLDIERS, for example, work on a broad canvas: the Iron Guard, the Spanish Civil War, the world war itself, and even after. The later books curl in on themselves, narrower, more hermetic, if no less fluent and convincing, but sideshows of sideshows, Greece, or Norway. The trick is that we know how the war turned out. But in 1939, or 1940, or even 1943, nobody on the ground had any real confidence Hitler was going to be beaten. And his proxies were everywhere, the Fascists going after the Italian press in exile (THE FOREIGN CORRESPONDENT), or a local cop trying to save Jews leaving Germany (SPIES OF THE BALKANS), knowing the Gestapo already have him in their sights. They are often stories about everyday heroism, and if not bravery, then endurance.
THE WORLD AT NIGHT came out in 2002. One reviewer remarked that it was like seeing CASABLANCA for the first time. I think this is pretty much on the money. “These papers have expired…” Paris, the German occupation. Gas rationing, and so on, ordinary and everyday life made inconvenient, if not always for the privileged. The guy at the center of the story is a French movie producer, who keeps working under the Nazis. He makes silly comedies, nothing politically inconvenient. Because he can move easily between France and Portugal, or France and Italy, he comes to the attention of British intelligence, and this of course bodes ill. But the point of the story isn’t the spook shit, it’s his increasing moral burden. It reminds me of André Cayatte’s PASSAGE DU RHIN (TOMORROW IS MY TURN in American release, terrible title), which is also about the occupation of Paris, ambiguous loyalties, and difficult personal choices.
The question posed in THE WORLD AT NIGHT is how we ourselves might behave, not in the face of inhumanity, per se (the Holocaust is far off the page), but in the actual daily humiliation of living under an occupying power. Why and how would we resist, or would we simply accept it? The dog barks, the caravan passes. The lights stay on, the cafés and brasseries are open, the wine gets poured, the choucroute garni is served. “This ought to take the sting out of Occupation,” Sam says in CASABLANCA, lifting his glass to toast Ilsa and Rick. The difference, in Furst’s story, is the lack of romance– Casson, the hero, gets into bed with enough good-looking women, but it’s not romantic in the sense of being a fairytale, of taking place in a world of heightened, and reductive, passions. The book is anchored in very simple, pedestrian realities. What the guy gets sucked into could easily get him killed. (There’s a terrific set-piece of a jailbreak, for instance.) And something else, that his choices are incremental, as ours in life so often are. They aren’t sudden. They don’t add up to a turning of the earth, until it’s too late to go back on them. Casson, essentially, backs himself into a place of no retreat. It feels very real, but also entirely necessary, as if, without foreknowledge, he took the path of least resistance, and found himself, or honor, something he never expected.
The ending is a jaw-dropper, which I won’t give away. Suffice it to say that it seems so uncharacteristic, but when looking back over the book, so utterly characteristic, it takes your breath away. I was flattened by it.
Heroes, like spies, often wear odd uniforms, and change their clothes more than once, if not their stripes. THE WORLD AT NIGHT is about a man who refuses to change his clothes. It’s about the intransigence of human nature, or its resilience. We’re mortal, and of course weak. When we rise to the occasion, as some of us have, it’s generally accident. Here, too. But the occasion of accident doesn’t mean our motives are false. Intentions count for little, in the end. To my mind, this is why THE WORLD AT NIGHT is so compelling: a man’s worth is in what he does, not in who he hopes or imagines himself to be.
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Alan Furst,
Casablanca,
David Edgerley Gates
Location:
Santa Fe, NM, USA
13 November 2012
The Great and Billowing Sea
by David Dean
I grew up hundreds of miles from the sea, and during my early years the idea of the ocean meant very little to me. My only trips to the beach when I was a kid consisted of two trips to Jekyll Island, Georgia when I had a cousin that lived there, and a single family vacation to Panama City, Florida. Oh yes, I almost forgot, we got to tag along with Uncle Jack and family when he won a contest vacation to St. Augustine. During that trip I don't even remember seeing the sea, as my cousin Nicky and me spent most of our time exploring the great and gracious Ponce de Leon Hotel. This Spanish style resort was unlike anything we had ever been exposed to; we knew we had entered a more rarefied atmosphere when on our first visit to the dining room we had an array of forks to choose from; their mysterious arrangement appearing as a test to determined who really belonged in such a place. I remember mom and dad appearing uncomfortable as they studied the baffling silverware. I have no memory of how we resolved the issue, but I don't recall going away hungry.
The other visits to the sea I mentioned were not without challenge, either. My very first time in the Atlantic my very life was in peril. Nicky and I (I always seemed to be with Nicky when things went wrong) had waded out to our waists at low tide and were splashing merrily about, as eight-year-olds are wont to do, when he returned to land to retrieve something. In the meantime, I lost myself in the warm water and gentle waves, feeling almost sleepy beneath a very hot sun, only remotely aware of a distant shouting. After a few moments of this dreamy inattention, it suddenly broke through to my consciousness that this shouting was drawing closer and closer. I also became aware of a lot of splashing. Turning back to face the beach, I could see that everyone to my right was fleeing toward shore, and even as I stood there, amazed and uncomprehending, the people to my left began to very actively join in this stunning migration. Then a single word separated itself from the others and floated from shore to me, somehow rising above all the din..."Shark!"
Though I had never given sharks much thought, and the book and movie version of "Jaws" was yet many years in the future, that single word managed to convey to me a keen sense of terror. As if dreaming, I turned my head in the direction the exodus had begun, and there, not so terribly far away, a large fin sliced through the calm waters further out, following the coastline at a leisurely pace. I could even see its tail whipping along behind it. Then I did what every rational person does in such a situation, I began to wade as quickly as my short, little legs would carry me toward terra firma, splashing and thrashing away; neither in a position to run nor to swim. It was then that I realized how life hangs on a moment...especially when it involves the great and billowing sea. I made it to shore unscathed, though rather shook up. I was told that despite all my agitation in the water, the great shark never wavered in its course, obviously uninterested in bony little boys...at least for that moment. I used this experience in a story entitled, "Natural Causes", which appeared in Ellery Queen Mystery Magazine's November 2003 issue.
On my next visit, I was stung by a very small sting ray. It hurt, but didn't require medical attention. The only catastrophe of note that occurred during the Panama City visit was a sunburn that I shall never forget. Lest you think Cousin Nicky escaped unscathed, during the St. Augustine trip, on our first trek beyond the safety of the walls of the hotel courtyard he was attacked by a dog and bitten several times. A short time later he would make headlines by becoming stuck between two buildings and having to be removed by the fire department. My aunt keeps a yellowed copy of the local paper covering this extraordinary event which contains a grainy black and white photo of my favorite cousin wedged into a small gap between two brick office buildings. I was not with him, so can offer no explanation.
The second half of my life I have spent cheek-by-jowl with the Atlantic. And though time and experience has improved my overall opinion of the sea, it has certainly not lessened my respect for its power and capriciousness. Hurricane Sandy demonstrated that just recently. We were largely spared the worst of it here, but to the north of us there is great devastation. There could have been no hurricane without the cooperation of the mighty sea.
Sandy is only one of many, many storms I have lived and worked through; not to mention floods. The sea is always at work trying to reclaim the land. It also claims people. Hardly a winter goes by that a clamming or scallop boat is not lost at sea off our coast. During the balmy summer months swimmers are taken by rip-tides.
Sometimes the sea returns things: A lady once came into my police department to speak with a supervisor. As I was the sergeant on duty, I met with her and inquired how we might be of service. Opening her rather large hand-bag, she extracted something yellowish, placed it on the desk between us and asked, "Do I have to turn this in?" It was the lower jaw bone of a human being and still retained most of its teeth. Some bore fillings. My own lower jaw may have hit the desk; I don't remember. Being a crack investigator however, I cried, "Where the hell did you get that?" You might guess her answer. "I found it on the beach after a storm." The next statement surprised me a little. "I've been using it as a paperweight on my desk."
With little grace, she reluctantly parted with her prize. I had obtained enough information to both identify and locate her should I need to. Perhaps you can also guess what my first line of inquiry was? Yes, that 's it--I quickly determined whether any significant other in this strange lady's life had gone missing. She had a divorced husband, but he was still amongst the breathing. The jaw appeared quite old, though this can be very deceptive after not a very long time in the ocean. It did strike me that the fillings appeared to be made of steel, not something commonly, or at all, used in the U.S.--many foreign freighters pass our coastline, and men overboard are more common than it is comfortable to think about. In any event, the jaw was packaged off to the state medical examiners office. To my knowledge, a match with a missing person has never been made. It remains a mystery of the deep. Other things have been brought ashore by the sea, but are too grisly to discuss here.
Even so, most of us are very drawn to that same dangerous sea. On sunny days there's nothing more pleasant than lying on the warm sands as the sea laps the shore mere yards away, and gulls wheel in a flawless sky. It is, after all, where life began...even if it is also where it sometimes ends.
Countless mystery and suspense stories occur on, or next to, the sea. Most of mine do. I suspect you could name dozens of stories and novels inspired by the sea if you put your mind to it. In fact, if the sea were to vanish tomorrow (and we were to somehow survive this catastrophic event) half the stories yet to be written would probably remain so.
The other visits to the sea I mentioned were not without challenge, either. My very first time in the Atlantic my very life was in peril. Nicky and I (I always seemed to be with Nicky when things went wrong) had waded out to our waists at low tide and were splashing merrily about, as eight-year-olds are wont to do, when he returned to land to retrieve something. In the meantime, I lost myself in the warm water and gentle waves, feeling almost sleepy beneath a very hot sun, only remotely aware of a distant shouting. After a few moments of this dreamy inattention, it suddenly broke through to my consciousness that this shouting was drawing closer and closer. I also became aware of a lot of splashing. Turning back to face the beach, I could see that everyone to my right was fleeing toward shore, and even as I stood there, amazed and uncomprehending, the people to my left began to very actively join in this stunning migration. Then a single word separated itself from the others and floated from shore to me, somehow rising above all the din..."Shark!"
Though I had never given sharks much thought, and the book and movie version of "Jaws" was yet many years in the future, that single word managed to convey to me a keen sense of terror. As if dreaming, I turned my head in the direction the exodus had begun, and there, not so terribly far away, a large fin sliced through the calm waters further out, following the coastline at a leisurely pace. I could even see its tail whipping along behind it. Then I did what every rational person does in such a situation, I began to wade as quickly as my short, little legs would carry me toward terra firma, splashing and thrashing away; neither in a position to run nor to swim. It was then that I realized how life hangs on a moment...especially when it involves the great and billowing sea. I made it to shore unscathed, though rather shook up. I was told that despite all my agitation in the water, the great shark never wavered in its course, obviously uninterested in bony little boys...at least for that moment. I used this experience in a story entitled, "Natural Causes", which appeared in Ellery Queen Mystery Magazine's November 2003 issue.
On my next visit, I was stung by a very small sting ray. It hurt, but didn't require medical attention. The only catastrophe of note that occurred during the Panama City visit was a sunburn that I shall never forget. Lest you think Cousin Nicky escaped unscathed, during the St. Augustine trip, on our first trek beyond the safety of the walls of the hotel courtyard he was attacked by a dog and bitten several times. A short time later he would make headlines by becoming stuck between two buildings and having to be removed by the fire department. My aunt keeps a yellowed copy of the local paper covering this extraordinary event which contains a grainy black and white photo of my favorite cousin wedged into a small gap between two brick office buildings. I was not with him, so can offer no explanation.
The second half of my life I have spent cheek-by-jowl with the Atlantic. And though time and experience has improved my overall opinion of the sea, it has certainly not lessened my respect for its power and capriciousness. Hurricane Sandy demonstrated that just recently. We were largely spared the worst of it here, but to the north of us there is great devastation. There could have been no hurricane without the cooperation of the mighty sea.
Sandy is only one of many, many storms I have lived and worked through; not to mention floods. The sea is always at work trying to reclaim the land. It also claims people. Hardly a winter goes by that a clamming or scallop boat is not lost at sea off our coast. During the balmy summer months swimmers are taken by rip-tides.
Sometimes the sea returns things: A lady once came into my police department to speak with a supervisor. As I was the sergeant on duty, I met with her and inquired how we might be of service. Opening her rather large hand-bag, she extracted something yellowish, placed it on the desk between us and asked, "Do I have to turn this in?" It was the lower jaw bone of a human being and still retained most of its teeth. Some bore fillings. My own lower jaw may have hit the desk; I don't remember. Being a crack investigator however, I cried, "Where the hell did you get that?" You might guess her answer. "I found it on the beach after a storm." The next statement surprised me a little. "I've been using it as a paperweight on my desk."
With little grace, she reluctantly parted with her prize. I had obtained enough information to both identify and locate her should I need to. Perhaps you can also guess what my first line of inquiry was? Yes, that 's it--I quickly determined whether any significant other in this strange lady's life had gone missing. She had a divorced husband, but he was still amongst the breathing. The jaw appeared quite old, though this can be very deceptive after not a very long time in the ocean. It did strike me that the fillings appeared to be made of steel, not something commonly, or at all, used in the U.S.--many foreign freighters pass our coastline, and men overboard are more common than it is comfortable to think about. In any event, the jaw was packaged off to the state medical examiners office. To my knowledge, a match with a missing person has never been made. It remains a mystery of the deep. Other things have been brought ashore by the sea, but are too grisly to discuss here.
Even so, most of us are very drawn to that same dangerous sea. On sunny days there's nothing more pleasant than lying on the warm sands as the sea laps the shore mere yards away, and gulls wheel in a flawless sky. It is, after all, where life began...even if it is also where it sometimes ends.
Countless mystery and suspense stories occur on, or next to, the sea. Most of mine do. I suspect you could name dozens of stories and novels inspired by the sea if you put your mind to it. In fact, if the sea were to vanish tomorrow (and we were to somehow survive this catastrophic event) half the stories yet to be written would probably remain so.
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