20 January 2024

Doing Its Zone Thing


Fiction writing is a strange business. Any writer will tell you that. Publishing is even stranger, but to get something published you have to write it first, so it's that pastime that interests me most. 

Picture this: the late Rod Serling, standing on a dark, spooky set, frowning with great intensity into the camera and saying, "You unlock this door with the key of imagination . . . You're moving into a land of both shadow and substance, of things and ideas. You've just crossed over into … the Writing Zone."

He actually said that, except for the next-to-last word. And in all honesty, the Writing Zone is just as odd and mysterious as the one in Serling's famous TV series. (I re-watched the whole thing again, by the way, not long ago--all 156 episodes. I think my wife's still trying to recover.)

So. What, exactly, am I talking about?

It's hard to describe. The Zone (writing, not twilight) is sort of a feeling, or a state of mind, that we fiction writers sometimes reach during the process of creating a story or novel. It's a strange sense of comfort and familiarity and satisfaction, where the ideas pop and bang in the sky like fireworks and the words flow like honey, and you think Whoa, this is fun, I can do no wrong. It doesn't happen every time you sit down to write or plan to write, but when it does, it's great. John Simmons, in a piece he wrote for Writers & Artists, said, ". . . When I'm in that zone, I'm not always aware of it. It's a wonderful feeling when you realise afterwards that you've been there. I think it's part of the addiction of being a writer."

I think so, too. It's not only a concept, it's a real place--athletes know this--and I suspect every one of you writers have felt its magic at one time or another. And when you find yourself there, in that mystical wonderland, time seems to fly. Hours can pass before you know it, and when you look back at what you've managed to accomplish during that time, it's usually good.

So the obvious question is, how do you get there? Or if you've made the trip and returned, how do you make sure you can get there again?

I've heard a lot of writers' opinions of how to "activate" the Zone, and--as you might imagine--they're all different. Some people write at the same time every day, or at the same place, or accompanied by certain sounds or external inputs. When all those conditions are met, they sit down and try to let the creative juices flow.

It's almost like an attempt to enter a hypnotic state: different things work for different subjects. Timewise, I think I ease into my Zone most often in the mornings, when my mind's fresh (or at least fresher). That's probably unfortunate for me, because I'm a night owl and always have been--but that's just the way the mop flops. And whatever time of day it is, I have to first be loose and comfortable. And warm. I don't do anything well if I'm cold. One writer friend told me she does her most productive thinking in the bathtub, which I guess is fine if you don't drop your writing pad or laptop.

Locationwise, I probably do most of my writing writing right here where I am now, in front of a desktop Mac in my little home office. Some of my non-writing writing, which I guess could be called planning, is also done in this chair but most often it's done elsewhere, in other places that I find relaxing. My recliner in the den is one, our backyard swing is another. If we lived near a beach--we don't--I would probably do most of my story-plotting there, and would be even more worthless than I am now. 

Another thing that works for me, in terms of getting lost in my story thoughts, is physical activity. I like to walk (walk, don't run, like the old Ventures song), and during long walks ideas can blossom out of nowhere, to the point that I often walk a lot further and longer than I intended. (Once again, because I'm an "outliner," much of my writing process is thinking about the story before the writing starts. I usually spend twice as much time dreaming up scenes and plotting in my head as I spend actually typing words into the computer.) I don't know if I believe everything I hear about exercise and endorphins firing up the brain cells, etc., but I do know some of my most satisfying stories were born on the walking track, which in my case are our neighborhood streets and our thankfully big back yard.

This is digressing a bit, but one thing that's not part of my writing process is assigning myself a quota (a certain number of words, pages, etc.) and making sure I meet that quota during my writing session(s). That kind of self-motivation is something I don't want or need. To me, writing is more like play than work, and I'd like to keep it that way. My opinion only.

A quick word about surroundings. Unlike most writers I know, I think and work best without background noise, or even music. It's the one time that I prefer silence. Not so for other writers: some of my author friends say they think best with a lot of bustle and noise and activity going on and a lot of people around them. One of them says she does her best plotting while sitting at a table in a busy Starbucks. Not me. Unless it's the soft sound of waves going in and out, I like it quiet. Main thing is, do whatever works.

And, having said that . . .

What works for you? Do you write in the same place every day, and/or at roughly the same time of day? Do you like music or other external sounds while you're writing? Are there any places where (or times when, or conditions under which) you can't write? Do you set quotas for yourself, and keep going until you reach them? Does that make you more productive? How do you increase your chances of finding your way to your Zone?

Author Carolyn Wheat (How to Write Killer Fiction) once said, "Getting to that state, and staying there for as long as possible, is the key to writing success."

Smart lady.

28 comments:

  1. Writing at night, silence usually, occasionally music depending on, Someday I'd like to try a sensory deprivation tank, but waterproof tablets aren't a sure thing.

    John, your subject title… Damn, that's clever! Love it.

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    1. Leigh, we're alike on most of that prepping: silence except for (occasional) music, if it's the right kind, and writing at night. I was serious when I said I think the ideas come to me easier in the mornings, but the writing itself is almost always done at night, for me. Often LATE at night.

      Yep, this is all about writing doing its zone thing. (Who says titles can't be fun . . . ?)

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  2. Great piece, John. (I, too, love the Twilight Zone -- and my wife hates it when I binge watch.)
    Like you say, every writer has a different method of getting in the Zone. Whatever works for you, works.
    I agree that ideas are always flowing. I always carry pens with me in case I have to write down ideas -- though now, post stone-age, I can use my phone. But I've also found that I never really have to write them down. Good ideas stick with me. Occasionally, while lying in bed trying to fall asleep, I get an idea for a twist in a story, or a new character. I get out of bed and write it down so I won't forget it. I've never had to refer to those notes. Good ideas stick with you.
    Congratulations on all your success.
    Bob

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    1. Hey Bob! Whoa, I envy you. Ideas, even the good ones, tend to slip my mind if I don't either write them down or start working with them pretty soon afterward. And you've never had ro refer to those notes you made?? You're a better man than I am.

      Funny thing is, I used to always tell my writing students to do exactly what you said you do--if you have an idea while in bed, get up and write it down, or dictate it into your phone, or whatever. But then I myself don't always do that, and more than once I've had what I thought was a great story idea in the middle of the night, and the following morning all I could remember was that I had a great story idea. I can only hope it occurred to me again later, but I don't think that was always the case. So, do as I say and not as I do!

      Sure appreciate your stopping in, here. Keep up the good work, and the good ideas!

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  3. Actual writing time (these days) is when I can grab it from other mandatory appointments. But it's always at my desk, at my computer, and 90% of the time in silence. Sometimes the Zone hits, sometimes it doesn't.
    In between times, I find long walks or sitting (again in silence) staring outside can work wonders for scenes, ideas, dialog to pop into my head. I just found out that one of my characters in a current story has a birthmark that looks like a cat stepped on his face. Didn't know that before. Nice...

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    1. How true, Eve. Sometimes it shows up, sometimes it doesn't. And I sometimes think waiting too hard for the Zone is a jinx, and ensures that it won't happen.

      I'm with you on the walking, or, as you said, the sitting outside. Scenes and dialog do indeed pop up, that way. Is all this a little spooky, or what?

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  4. When I get the idea, I have to write, and I'm in the zone as long as the words keep coming. I need silence. My husband is trained to zip the lip and disappear when I say, "Writing!" It's a good thing, since he'll be retiring soon. And yes, the ideas come when I'm relaxed. As I've said many times, that's in bed in the morning, on the floor doing stretches, on my daily walk, in the shower, and occasionally while driving. The catch is remembering until I have a chance to write them down, since age has put a crimp in that. I believe that "in the zone" feeling IS the production of endorphins. I was never athletic enough to get it from sports. I did feel it yesterday while organizing my notes on Medicare and our retirement finances. How weird is that? I also got a Storia contract in my email yesterday. That stimulated ideas. Writing! Endorphins...

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    1. What a bossy lady!! Just kiddin'. I wish I could get that same reaction, Liz, when I need silence for my writing.

      I love it that you eased into the writing zone while organizing your notes on Medicare--if that's not a testimonial on why we should all keep writing despite advancing age, I don't what is! And congrats on the Storia contract! Maybe our stories will be together in the launch next month. And yes, that kind of thing CAN stimulate ideas!

      Thanks as always.

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  5. A great post, John. Back in the 80s, I realized nothing we did was helping kids learn to write, what with all the stress on grammar, spelling, and punctuation, so I tried to find other methods. Rico's book on clustering or webbing was one, and so was Flow by Mihaly Csikszentmihalyi, which is the zone you talk about here. It was a revelation to me, but really hard to teach.
    It took me a long time to find the writing zone myself (by then, I could do it in teaching after 15 years), and it came from writing, writing, writing. Athletes and musicians get there by hours and years of practice, and it's the same way with writing. If you have to think about what you're doing, you're not there yet. I knew I was there when I wrote the last 7000 words of the first draft of a novel in one day. But it took me the outlining and changing and revising that outline and obsessing about the little stuff until everything was right that finally removed all the resistance and let it happen (LET, not MADE).
    I read an interview years ago with Jodi Picault, who said you have to train yourself to write on demand so that when you sit down at the desk, you can produce words. I guess that's it, and there's no short cut. You pay your dues and practice the scales until they're ingrained. Then you do it.
    It don't come easy.

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    1. Is sure don't, Steve. And yes, that kind of thing IS hard to teach. I think all we as teachers can do is what you seem to have successfully done: show the students that this kind of thing comes from writing and then writing more and then writing more, and what really triggers that magical zone or whatever it is, is the underlying confidence that you actually CAN produce something worthwhile. I once heard a politician say the secret to delivering a great speech is to understand beforehand that you can deliver a great speech.

      Hey, one reason I love SleuthSayers is the knowledge I gain through reading the COMMENTS section after the post. Thanks!

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  6. I love reading how other writers manage the whole thing. My best time is late afternoon and into evening, though I find I can write any time of day. In the morning I tell myself I'm going to work on whatever and let that promise rattle around in my head, and then when I sit down to write, I seem to be ready. This was a habit I developed when I had a day job in an office somewhere and wrote when I got home in the evening. Flowing into the zone was something that just happened, when I stopped thinking about what would come next and just accepted what came out of the pen or my fingers. Trust, showing up at the typewriter often so my brain knew to be ready . . . I don't know how it happens. I'm just grateful that it does.

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    1. Me too, Susan. And I love that you said it "just happened, when I stopped thinking about what would come next . . ." At those times, I'm sometimes not even aware that things are going well until I look back and see that I've written four or five pages of pretty good stuff--and I then try to keep it up, until, as Liz said, the words stop coming to me.

      And, like you, I love reading about how others feel about all this.

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  7. Elizabeth Dearborn20 January, 2024 13:22

    I like to listen to music when I'm writing, but nothing with words, only instrumentals. A few days ago, I started twiddling once again with a story I have been "working" on for quite some time, & to my surprise, I got into the Zone enough so that maybe I can actually finish the silly thing & have it published!

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    1. Good thought!! I feel the same way: if I do listen to music while I write, it has be instrumentals, nothing with words. Interesting! I wonder if others have to do it that way also.

      I wish you the best, with that story you're working on!

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  8. Would it be possible to have an easier method to subscribe to all the Sleuthsayers posts? I only hear about these posts through authors in the SMFS, yet clicking on Home reveals other great posts. Thanks

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    1. I will ask our gurus (Rob and Leigh) about that. One way, of course, would be to just google the site (https://www.sleuthsayers.org) each day, or bookmark it. That's what I do.

      Thank you for asking!

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    2. To Anonymous: I just got this email back from Rob:

      I use a free RSS feeder, namely inoreader. You tell it all the blogs you like and it sets all new entries on a page for you.

      Hope this helps.

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  9. Oh, that lovely zone! I need silence, too, John - and I'm happy to see most writers commenting here do as well. The world around me has to disappear, so I can fully immerse into the one I am creating. And as far as word count per day...I calculate that I need to write 4 hours a day, five days a week, to make my publisher deadlines. But I don't actually count, or even write every weekday. Somehow, I make it, but it's no fun if I have to force myself. Which is why I only write one book a year, I guess.

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    1. Melodie, I confess to being a bit surprised to hear that many others also need to write in silence--I thought I was in the minority, there. If I do have soft music going in the background (as was mentioned earlier), it has to be an instrumental--no words.

      I don't use a quota of any kind (pages, words, etc.), but I know a LOT of other writers do. As for your case, I think it's cool that you know, by now, how much time you should spend writing in order to meet your deadlines. WHOA! With regard to not wanting to force yourself, GOOD FOR YOU. I would hate for this great and enjoyable "hobby" of mine to suddenly become work, and writing to a set schedule would cut out all the fun of it, for me.

      As for writing one book a year, I think that's pretty darn impressive. Keep it up!

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  10. Excellent post, John. I tend to write at night after my wife and dogs have gone to bed. I’ve tried in the morning, but my mind is cluttered with things on my (wife’s) to-do list. Where do I write? Always in my home office.. I listen to music sometimes (wearing earbuds), mostly classical, sometimes jazz. If an idea comes after I’m in bed, I’ll get up and write it down. Heck, I can’t even use the restroom and still remember what I wanted to write down. A few times I decided to make edits immediately, which led to a late night session. I don’t set quotas, though I know I probably should.

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    1. Jim, I write a LOT at night after my wife goes to bed. And I too write mostly in my home office, on the opposite end of the house from our bedroom. As for musical accompaniment, I've heard a good many fellow writers say they listen to classical music. Interesting.

      I salute you, sir, for hopping out of bed and writing down your ideas. That's dedication. I don't do it, and I should. And YES, deciding at night to start in on edits can backfire, in terms of lost sleep (but maybe it's worth it?). As for quotas, as I think I said, I don't set 'em and don't even like 'em. But, as everyone seems to agree, whatever works, works. Different moods for different dudes.

      I certainly appreciate these thoughts. Thank you, and best to you in ALL writing endeavors!

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  11. I'm usually a late-night writer after the family's gone to bed and it's just me and the cats. Although I can write in the afternoons if I have a short deadline (7,000+ words in a day, yeah, I've done that). I don't need silence, which I think comes from years and years having to produce coherent legal writing while in the middle of a busy office. I had to learn to zone out (there's that word) everything that was going on around me and concentrate on what I was writing. If I'm having trouble getting into the world of the story, I put on a pair of over-the-ear headphones and listen to music, usually instrumentals. Although while I was writing a longer, more action-packed project last year, I listened to a playlist of oldish rock 'n roll music on repeat so often that the lyrics faded into the background and the beat helped zone me in on the pacing of the project.

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    1. Ha--I bet that "not needing silence" IS from your years of tuning out your noisy surroundings. And I suspect you're right about the lyrics fading into the background if the song's been played enough or is just familiar enough--I'd never thought of that. If that's true, old pop-rock music would probably work for me too.

      Whatever you do, it apparently works--7K is a lot of words to write in a day.

      Thanks so much for stopping in, here, Annie!

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  12. I do need silence to work or "zone out". But I agree that physical activity helps immensely. Walking is great, even just cleaning helps.

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    1. I know a lot about walking. But cleaning? (Did I spell that right?) It helps, too???

      I'm marking up one more in the "silence" column. I still think we outnumber the noise lovers.

      Thanks, Jacqueline!

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  13. I'm a "noise" person. Complete silence freezes my brain... it's always been like that. I wasn't the kind of college student who could work at the library. Needed that radio going! Ah, the zone! I wrote 2 books in a breathless run like that. One was SF, the other I hope to get published, maybe next year if my publisher goes for it. When I was done, I freaked out a bit. First draft in a rush to get out. Maybe it wasn't any good - okay it needed adjustments, but man, the stuff that came out of my head .... and I barely remembered any of it :)

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    1. Ah, Martine, you're tipping the balance. Interesting (!!) that you prefer being around external sounds and activity--and the main thing is, you know that it works for you.

      Sincere congratulations on your writing those books in such a short time. As you said, first drafts usually need a lot of tweaking, but at least you got it all down on paper in a hurry. How many folks never complete that first draft, right? (I do the same with some of my short stories: get it all out of my head and onto paper, and only then make the needed adjustments.)

      Keep on doing whatever you're doing! And thanks as always for your thoughts here at SS.

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  14. I'm the "noise" type. My brain freezes in complete quiet; that has always been the case. I wasn't the kind of student who could work at a library while attending college. Had to have that radio on! The zone, ah! That's how I wrote two volumes in a gasping sprint. One was science fiction, and the other, if my publisher is interested, I expect to publish next year. After finishing, I became a little scared. Hurrying to get out with the first draft. Perhaps it wasn't very good; certainly, it needed to be adjusted, but my goodness, what poured out of my head and how little of it I could remember :)


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