17 February 2024

Two Dozen Writers Go into a Bar . . .


 

Last Tuesday was publication day for Murder Neat: A SleuthSayers Anthology, by the Level Short imprint of Level Best Books. As others this week have said, this project is close to our hearts here at SS. Discussions about it began long ago, and thanks to our two fantastic editors, our "team" anthology is finally here. 

All of us talked, mostly via emails, about everything from what the theme of the anthology should be (besides crime, which is a given) to what the title should be, and in our case the title--Murder, Neat--came from the theme: All twenty-four of these stories are set in some kind of bar, tavern, pub, dive, honkytonk, or waterhole. (Not that any of us are at all familiar with those kinds of places.)

I think one of the reasons we decided to use a drinking establishment as our linchpin was probably the same reason the creators of Cheers set their TV series in a bar. It's one of those meeting-places that attracts all kind of characters at some time or another--good, bad, simple, complex--and all of them have stories to tell.

At the beginning of my story in the anthology, which has the misleading title "Bourbon and Water" (I love double meanings), the bar is in a place yet unknown and the two characters sitting at a dark corner table--a man and a woman--are themselves a mystery. We don't know who they are or why they're there. What we do know is that the woman has had a terrifying dream about a couple who seems much like the two of them, and her dream is my story-within-a-story, the one she tells to the man.

Because of that structure, this is, in a way, one of those "framed" narratives we've discussed often at this blog, the kind of tale that starts in the present, goes someplace else (usually the past), and ends once again in the present. The difference here is that the woman's dream--her glimpse of a of a life-changing event--serves not as the primary story but as sort of a setup. The crime is revealed later.

Not that it matters, but the dream sequence is the part that first popped into my head, when I started brainstorming the story. It happens that way sometimes: the crime part of a crime story needs to be central to the plot--we are, after all, sayers of sleuth, not sooth--but the Evil That Men Do is not necessarily the first thing I think of. Also a part of all this, in the planning stages, was the "bar" theme. How could I mix the required location with a crime and a twisty plot and come up with something that makes sense? Well, that's the fun of all this, isn't it? Create characters who are (hopefully) interesting, put them some kind of unusual location, throw in some criminal activity and other life-threatening incidents--there's a BIG one in this story--and see what happens.

I hope those of you who read it will find it not only mysterious but satisfying. It was certainly satisfying to write. 

I can't wait to read the whole book.

By the way . . .

To all you loyal friends and readers who stop in to visit us here at SleuthSayers: Thank you for that. Sincerely. We have a good time here, and hope you do too.

I think you'll like the anthology.


17 comments:

  1. Great setup John! I'm looking forward to your story (all the others, too). Maybe my favorite story about dreaming is Charles Beaumont's "Perchance to Dream." It ended up becoming a pretty good Twilight Zone episode.

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    1. Thank you, Larry. Same here. I think I mentioned to you that I re-watched all 156 Twilight Zone episodes a couple years ago (my wife's still trying to recover), and yes, "Perchance to Dream" was a good one. Many of Beaumont's stories were wonderful--I have a collection of 13 of them here on the shelf.

      Take care, and thanks again.

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    2. I got to see TZ in reruns and I've loved it for 50+ years! And I love Beaumont and I have several of his collections, including the recent "The Carnival and Other Stories."

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  2. Just read your story last night - that was a great twist, John. And oh, how I loved Twilight Zone - my favorite was always "To Serve Man".

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    1. Thank you, Eve. I bet you can tell that one was fun to write. Looking forward to reading your story and all the others--I'm waiting for the paperback, which'll probably be coming in a few days (I hope).

      I'll always be a Twilight Zone fan. I even watched all the old One Step Beyond episodes, from the series in (I think) the '60s. There was one about a tsunami and a lady in a wheelchair that still brings tears to my eyes. Love those TV anthology series!

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  3. Remember The Outer Limits? The story that still haunts me was "Demon With a Glass Hand", written by Harlan Ellison and starring Robert Culp.

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    1. Oh God yes, I watched The Outer Limits too. Remember the weird theme music? But I don't remember that episode!!! (If I saw it I think I'd remember it because I liked Robert Culp.) Sounds like search-time at YouTube for me . . .

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  4. Looking forward to reading your story, John, not to mention everyone else's. I like reading frame story set-ups, too, but can only think of one story (novel, actually) where I used one.

    Yeah, this was a fun collection to write for, wasn't it? I used to watch Twilight Zone religiously, too. Well, that's probably not exactly the right adverb, is it?

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    1. Ha! Probably not, Steve. YES, my story was fun to write, and I too think the whole anthology'll be a lot of fun to read. Looking forward to it.

      The thing that surprised me when I did a binge re-watch of the whole TZ series (a boxed set of DVDs) was that so many great writers did stories there: Ray Bradbury, Richard Matheson, Charles Beaumont, Earl Hamner, etc. And Serling wrote more than half the episodes himself (some of those good, some not so). Also, the fun of seeing all those young actors who later became superstars.

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  5. Love this line! " Create characters who are (hopefully) interesting, put them some kind of unusual location, throw in some criminal activity and other life-threatening incidents" - perfect! Exactly what we strive to do. Love the comments coming down on this post, too.

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    1. Melodie, it's easier to say that than to really do it, right? But it's sure fun to try. My favorite description of what the story process looks like is: (1) get man up a tree, (2) throw rocks at man, and (3) get man down from tree. It's not just enough to get your character into a bad spot; you must make it much much worse for him while he's there, before you get him out of trouble.

      As I said to others, I'm SO looking forward to reading these stories and seeing just how everyone approached this theme. Thanks for chiming in!

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  6. Great set-up for a story. You're an inspiration as always. And I love a good plot chart.

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    1. Hey Bob. How kind of you. As for plot charts, I don't always follow 'em but some of them do make sense. Looking forward to reading your story, my friend!

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  7. Now I've got a dilemma, John. I'm up to Janice's story on Kindle. Do I leapfrog over it to yours or treat myself to a twofer this afternoon?

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    1. Twofer. But she'll be a hard act to follow . . .

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  8. Yes indeed! I have a good time! And can't wait for the anthology to get here!

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  9. I am looking forward to the audio of this collection. And you've inspired me to revisit Charles Beaumont and TTZ! Twist Phelan (Can't seem to post except as Anonymous!)

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